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Poem Number 714
You people
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You people,
You people make me sick,
My throat just burst with anger!
Do you know your words could kill?
You've left me almost speachless,
but never empty handed.
I can't control the pressure,
I'm nothing but an insect.
Don't you realize?
You're only this too.
You've tried to burry me,
But the dirt broke your back.
You placed on a rose,
But the bottom thorn impaled you.
I've found my place upon a pedal.
I wait for you to burn it down.
-Dru
I'll see you all in Hell :)
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You placed *me* on a rose
*sorry..
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