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Poem Number 1057
A Positive Experience
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just a girl
feelin’ a little lonely
life’s droning on
can’t find a reason to live
.
enter a boy
never tried to love
but life’s going nowhere
and he made her smile
.
together, they radiate
young love conquers
makes life less lonesome
love
.
the girl, she changes
her life rearranges
everything’s a smile
old things seem new
.
she’s something to live for
a reason to try harder
she’s a newfound confindence
she’s not fighting alone
.
time takes it’s toll
she’s tired, he’s tired
always together
never really together
.
he tries, but she lies,
he cries, the magic dies
no responsible party
too young to face up
.
clashing ideas
countless reasons
for breaking love
now it’s easy
.
oh so capable
but oh so afraid
for a lack of options
they’re sticking with it
.
she’s still just a girl,
just a little bit older,
still a little alone,
just a little more unsure.
.
Lana E R
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