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Teen Salon - Four


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Poem Number 1052
*~off the wallz of my mind~*


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do you hear something?
maybe it's just me
someone in my head
is yelling
can you see through my eyez?
can you breathe through my pain?
i can hear you
screaming my name
screaming out loud
love has forgotten me
left here to rot
alone in the darkness
falling through the trees
landing
scattering the pieces of my soul
across the great beyond
waiting for you
to come back
*~*~LoKI~*~*
i've been away for a long time, and this is my first stab at something new...i don't think anyone would remember me from here, but oh well, see you in the funnies!!!
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If you're who I think you are then you know I love you, even if you are a wench. =) MWAH~~~~~~~Lolli
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