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Teen Salon - Three


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Poem Number 313
There were so many times
I wanted to die
the world always taunting me
"just go on give death a try"
so i took a deep breath
and was ready to take a shot
I held the bottle filled with pills
and began to swallow one by one
then the door swong open
the pills droped to the floor,
i didn't see the lable ,
then i saw some one looking at some porn
ever gross u roman
just kidding
lol not funckin ffunny
i know eh
roman your hot,from little mandy


Commentary:
not bad but b careful...i think u lost ur rhythem
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