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Teen Salon - Three


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Poem Number 310
When will it stop hurting?
When will my heart mend?
sometimes the best feeling is when it ends
But really how do I know this
That it'll stop if I'm put to rest
How do I know the pain will go
If I make it through this last test
Cause when I feel like crying
You step into my head
And make the pain just fade away
Erasing the tears my eyes bled
just actions from you bring happiness to me
I must now let my heart feed
On the need to be free
and to laugh with glee
are you happy for me


Commentary:
f*** that hit me, all i can say i be strong cause for every person who brings u down only makes u stronger for another day :}.
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man thats pretty raw, no sugar coating there! its good though its brutal with the emotions i love it
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