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Teen Salon - Three


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Poem Number 307
a peach is a peach,
a plum is a plum,
a kiss aint a kiss,
without some tounge
so open yer mouth,
and close yer eyes,
and give yer tounge some exersise!!!!
ha ha ha!!!!
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Man you guys are desperate...
I'm sure that this you won't forget
Vecause you've met your match, I bet,
This could cause you to soon regret
The way you smoked that cigarrette
I smoke grits like poets
take ya hands and throw it
got her tongue on my nutz
so act like ya know it


Commentary:
That's pretty damn funny :-)
~Alissa~
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that is not funny!!
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that's pretty stupid if ya ask me

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is it a guy or a girl what wrote this? dog, you can't even spell write
in Ebonics! If you're a guy, you are definitely going through a gender
crisis. and if you're a girl, self respect is more impressive than a
talented tongue
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Giv'em a chance you goblin faced traitor. take those tones to high crit solo #1.Enough of you're insolence, Chump!
terra%firma
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