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Teen Salon - Three


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Poem Number 283
i see dead people
In the faces of my childrens friends
i see dead people
that is from the "six sense"
whats lost is lost and done is done, the six sense is only one. he lost his life he lost his heart, he lost his brain, he died unsmart. broken and fatal down in his bed. he sits there and crys for the
dead. he hopes to help them find the truth, he hopes to help them become immune.
What the hell is wrong with you?
i see dead people


Commentary:
i see dumb people...they're everywhere...for example see the above moron...
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Lets turn this moron into a poet
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