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Poem Number 251
Man Gone Blind
Commentary:
Blind
No light,
Pierces through,
The darkness,
Thick as,
Prison walls,
Locks him in.
No one,
Can see the terror,
Lurking behind,
The clouded eyes,
Of the man,
Gone blind.
~Cat
hey all it's me again... A little bit of a different poem this time.
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Cool
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Cat..just curious...Is the man gone physically blind or is he blind to his surroundings, unable to see through his own darkness to escape the prison he's put himself in? By the way, I like it. *Michelle* southernangel728@aol.com
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It's really however you want to look at it... when I wrote it he was blind to the emotions that others had for him... but looking back at it now I guess physically blind would work too :-)
~Cat
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