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Poem Number 1988
I watch from afar as you fall in love with my best friend
I can't help but feel broken inside as you hold hands, causing my thumps to thump harder
As she kisses your sweet lips, its not fair because i wanted first to try, it hurts more than i can bare
As jelously soon begins to appear.
And again i fear
As I watch from afar as you fell in love with my best friend
I can't hold it back
i killed your dog
Commentary:
spot the homoeroticism!
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where?
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there, between those two ancient, rusting gender binaries.
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right on sister
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