The Interactive Poetry Pages

Teen Salon - One


View poem without authors
Top Welcome Page for the Interactive Poetry Pages.
Poem Number 1951
when the bright lights shine
---marie williams, north chicago il
and the heart monitor beeps,
---Anonymous
then starts to whine
---Anonymous
when my life starts to fade away,
---Anonymous
all i can see is you standing there with the tears streaming down your cheeks
---Anonymous
i love you so much
---Anonymous
you will never know...
---Anonymous
how long i've wanted to tell you that you have my love
---Anonymous
but now it's too late to say those words to you
---Anonymous
i'll soon be leaving and rising above
---Anonymous
i'll always remember the face i last saw and how i could never tell you i love you
---Anonymous
for in the land of the dead, our mouths are sewn up
---Anonymous
and it just so there, so cold...
---Anonymous
you will never know
---Anonymous
but I will never forget
---Anonymous
How much I loved you
---Anonymous
Yet could never speak the words to let you know...such sorrow is this
---Anonymous


Commentary:
whoever started this poem, i want to thank you because i feel that i can relate to what you wrote. i think you write with great passion.
-------
WOW! I love this poem. Nice job... it was very descriptive. I truely love it... keep writing!
Add to commentary


Unless specifically noted otherwise, copyrights for all lines entered belong to the authors only.
View poem without authors
Return to current poems in progress.
Completed Poems.
Top Welcome Page for the Interactive Poetry Pages.
Send a general comment to the web author, or view some of the comments left by others.
Thanks in advance for any feedback you can pass on.
Disruption report - Please choose this link to report any disruptive or offensive entries, or closing sprees, if they appear. Thank you.

Brought to you by Ann Cantelow.