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Poem Number 1951
when the bright lights shine
and the heart monitor beeps,
then starts to whine
when my life starts to fade away,
all i can see is you standing there with the tears streaming down your cheeks
i love you so much
you will never know...
how long i've wanted to tell you that you have my love
but now it's too late to say those words to you
i'll soon be leaving and rising above
i'll always remember the face i last saw and how i could never tell you i love you
for in the land of the dead, our mouths are sewn up
and it just so there, so cold...
you will never know
but I will never forget
How much I loved you
Yet could never speak the words to let you know...such sorrow is this
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whoever started this poem, i want to thank you because i feel that i can relate to what you wrote. i think you write with great passion.
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WOW! I love this poem. Nice job... it was very descriptive. I truely love it... keep writing!
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