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Poem Number 1912
We have talked about our friends
our family and our lives
We've asked eachother questions
asked about all the lies
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We have stayed up all hours of the night
telling our experiences and our past relations
we've confessed all our mistakes
but never about the you and I situation
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I start to tell you how I feel
I want to tell you about all the pain
But I know I can't
and my heart makes me refrain
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I know how it goes...
you love me and you always will
I wish love was like a sickness
and could be lost with the swallow of a pill
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It seems as though my love won't stop
and my heart is like a sea
overflowing with you're name ingraved
why can't you're heart be the same and love me
*We are only FRIENDS right?
Commentary:
This poem is hot and it also reminds me of this situation i'm in where my friend likes me but, i don't like him like that because
1). He use to go with my God sister
2). I am or was talking to his best friend
I definitely like stanzas (17 - 21) because of the fact you down to the fact that you'll are just friends
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i love this poem its really great thanks for writing it ,Krystal
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