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Poem Number 1910
What is it thats killing me?
I ask because i dont know
Even though
The symptoms show
What is it thats killing me?
There's no way to be sure
I sitting here thinking, will there ever be a cure?
but whats worth living for?
what is it thats killing me?
will i leave this world alone?
all i seem to do is moan
all i hear in my head is an endless drone
what is it thats killing me?
this deadly virus is not small
this scary virus makes me crawl
Will it be my real downfall?
Commentary:
My dream came true, i couldnt believe i had someone like you, but i wasnt ready for this relationship...i ripped your heart in 2. i didnt want you to get hurt, u were one of the only guys who didnt treat me like dirt, i guess im just 2 big of a flirt. i wish that u didnt waste ur time on me, and i hope the kindness in ur heart...other gurls can see, i never realized how painul this would be... Amy
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ed me on w/ ur deceiving smile, and we even got close 4 a little while, but i tried 2 play hard 2 get, i tried 2 make u run the xtra mile. but i gave in 2 this tempting sin, with out knowing our relationship was beggingin 2 thin, wut we did goin thru my head over and over again. but now i realize that it all was a lie, i lay here w/ a knife, writing this poem, and beggingin 2 cry, and i think about it and sigh only because of my one true luv i wanna die. ~(AMY)~
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So... you guys boned right?
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haha
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