I hate the way loving you
makes me feel
I hate the feeling
but I can't deny its real
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I hate the way you look at her
then she smiles in my face
I act as if it doesn't hurt
and I walk away with grace
~
I hate the way you walk
the way its always away from me
from the day we started talking
you'r back is the only thing I'd see
~
I hate the way you lie to me
the way you lie to make me feel good
You said you really loved me
but I knew you never could
So for some strange reason
I think I have to get over you
Maybe its because you've made it clear
as for love you need something new
~...this poem is dedicated to the person I would call my best friend, he has helped me through so much and I just hope one day I am able to help him as much as he has helped me...
Brandon thank you, and I love you.
I love the way hating you shows a sigh of how much I've cared and in the end it doesn't really matter one single bit cause i know i once loved you

you have written something from the heart without making yourself a
martyr. It shows me someone honest who is self confident and unafraid
You write well, and I wish you well. Believe me, if he has read this
poem, you have helped him. I wish you both a good life.
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Thank you very much, no he hasn't seen if but if he does I hope I have helped him. I appreciate the complement right now I have writers block so I can think maybe it will go away thanks again....
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this poem has touched me it really has -i cried alittle bit when i read this poem b/c it fits me so well- i hope and pray that he'll understand and come back to you..you are a talented writer and i sincerly wish you and him the best of luck!!!with love jenny cantwell(randyzbaby0304@yahoo.com)
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I really liked this poem b/c i think all girls can think of a time where this poem dealt w/ their life. ~)dncr(~
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i really injoyed this poem as i read it it broght back memories of the one i used to love or so i thought

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i really injoyed this poem as i read it, it broght back memories of the one i used to love or so i thought!!! ****

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hi i love your poem very much...if i were you u, ill let him read this poem its so nice. i wish you both a good life. i was touched bby the poem. (blackberry016@yahoo.com)

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Are you people on drugs? The rhyme and meter is off, the images are as bland as licking wet cardboard, and the purpose for the piece is selfish. If I were him and I read this, I'd laugh my way to the printer, print it out and throw darts at it.
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CRI