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Poem Number 1905
I hate the way loving you makes me feel...I hate the feeling, but I can't deny its real.
The way you stare I try not to care but I love you and when your around I feel bare
When I look to your face my pain is erased, although brief, it's a much higher place
You take me places I cannot go alone, I love you more than you'll ever know.
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Brandon,
If you ever find this poem on line just know I still think about you and every minute we spent together. You said you loved me a billion dollars worth but there is not enough money in this world to describe my feelings for you. I'm so tired of the struggle between us, if we are meant to be we will be. I love you!!!!
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I was wrong... I'm sorry.
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You know what? you are a sap....Your pathetic, instead of telling your man what you feel you put it on the internet...what if he never sees this huh? Why dont you just tell him how you feel idiot!
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