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Teen Salon - One


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Poem Number 1901
How safe is a kiss
It is only a sweet moment of happy Bliss
How safe is that one kiss
That night we kissed i fell for you, You told me you loved me and be there forever, but i never knew in my heart how much I cared for you,We lasted for a long time than ended up apart then
You told me you loved me and i fell for you again if only i knew i would end up heart broken i would have moved on.
But your windows they closed before ready were eyes, and my heart had laready given to your bullshit lies
So I kept watching through lines not so closed
like your good friend Malinda Jen Pedigrenrose
or your old neighbor I saw in the store
and your cousin Linette the one whose a whore.
They coughed up their stories
without a request
that's when I decided
you were sick
Choking, choking, choking, in the deep blue of your eyes, an endless
pit of loneliness. I know I won't make it. I know you hate me.
How can someone hate you, if they have no soul to hate with, why
do you cause this nightmare to disturb me?


Commentary:
hey heres something that i hope u all like i wrote it:
THY LOVE IS DEEP
THY LOVE IS BLIND
THY LOVE IS WITHIN YR EYES
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That was cute 2 the max : ) R.P.
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Love always seems to end up dead... at least the good parts anyway. CRI
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i dont think you wrote it but thats ok cause ive done screwed you anyway
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