someone critisized the poem i wrote
and if he does again ill punch him in the throat
it aint cool to make fun of
even though at home with your mom we know you get pleanty of love
cause you are a lil mommas boy
she thinks of you as her little toy
its people like you that make poets quit
and if you ever make one quit ill take your leg and get rid of it
cause what i wrote it wasnt bad
your either a skater punk or a surfer that likes to say rad
you prolly thought i was gonna say mad
but your still on your moms breast just like a very young lad
so what do you think f this type of writing
i think ill call it dont try and suck up lets just start fighting
i dont know if youll ever read this
but i hope once you do you give from me your mom a great big kiss
even thought shes all used to that
you r just alittle spoiled brat
your such a little rich bot you eat fancy food
you prolly think im being all rude
but i dont care you were tryin to put down
and now im going to come into your city into your town
and knock you out with my fist
even though youll have a hard head and ill break my wrist
cause you really dont want to mess with me
cause ill break your neck by hitting you off of a tree
cause wit what you did i really disagree
but i still dont think you can see
how much that could have hurt somebody
putting them down making them feel cruddy
what you did was ntot right
and now you just started a big fight
now anyone and everyone knows
that you "peace love" your poem blows
this is vinnies also all of it

ok, here's a rebuttal from that "rich boy" who actually happens to be a girl who has been writing on this page for avbout five years. the person i said nbeeded to grow up was whoever took the poenm being written there and wrote "WAZZZZUPPP" or something equally uncreative and insulting to the work. so if you have any more accusations that you can't back up, bring it on, because this used to be a community of ARTISTS, and i would like to see it become that once more.
-peacelove