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Teen Salon - One


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Poem Number 1722
This is not true for remember God loves you!
He will be there for you no matter what
He has undying love and reaches out for you
So take his hand and follow him!
He is the Truth, the light, the Way
he can do anything, miracles preformed
as long as he is in your heart, you are safe from Satan's harm!
When you feel alone, your heart distraught
you might not feel Him, but he is there.


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Your poem was very good. I liked it a lot. It reminded me a lot of when my friend left for Florida.
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This poem is very inspiring to me!

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Umm all I have to say that God does love you He will be there for you no matter what
He has undying love and reaches out for you
So take his hand and follow him!
He is the Truth, the light, the Way
he can do anything, miracles preformed
as long as he is in your heart, you are safe from Satan's harm!
Its all true he will love you forever

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How can you possibly deny someone elses feelings, they feel God loves them-Who are you to undermine their experiences, you obviously haven't experienced Gods love- But they claim they have! Just as i've never been in love, you cant prove to me other people are, they can only rationalise to me what its like- But i'll never experience the love they have as its their emotions!! Yet I have no doubt one day I will feel im in love, whether I am or not or if it'll be how other peoples love is, is irrelevant! How can you love a stranger...you can't, so if God is alien to you...then you will not experience his love (and I truly feel sorry for you!simply because its incredable, I can feel it and you can't call that Bullshit-How dare you say Im lying,I know im not and I know its real)...but for whatever reason God does love you, you believe it or not...for crying out loud he created you, how would your mother or father feel if you disowned them? and just like a rejected lover, the person who was rejected can only wait in hope and that their lover will come back into their arms- They can try all they like to convince them that its better for both of them to maintain the relationship but if the other wont listen then what can they do? nothing! who suffers...both parties!
Just because its not part of your life experience, doesnt irradicate it from that of the life of others!! Have some respect...oh, and widen your vocabulary! K
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