poem..
poem

A lonely torch stood alone in the abysmal hollows of darkness
a glistening pale light stretching desperately out
it flickered, and breathed
restless in its search for meaning.
....Ar? Comments are much appreciated.

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Penis breath, a lover's dread
Is what you get when you give head
Unpleasant as it tends to be
Be grateful that he doesn't pee
It's times like this,you wonder why
you bothered reaching for his fly
But it's too late, can't be a tease
Accept the facts, get on your knees
You know you've got a job to do
So open wide and shove it through
Lick the tip then take it all
Don't drag your teeth or he might bawl
Slide up and down, use your tongue
And feel the precum start to run
Your jaw it aches, your neck is numb
So when the fuck's he gonna cum
Just, when you can't take anymore
You hear your lover's mighty roar
And when he hits that real high note
You feel it oozing down your throat
Salty, fishy, sticky, stuff
Okay, already that's enough
Let's switch you say, before you gag
And what revenge, your on the rag.
Maddie*U
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Great imagery Maddie, you really have a talent with words...Aqua
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You put a rocket in my pocket baby!
Keep up the great writings...Ron(Hedghog)Jeremy
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it looks as though someone is a slut giving head is for hoes even thou it was a funny peom
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sheesh, someone is quite delusional. As if they lived in the 50's. Oh! Sex is bad! Sex is Bad! Oral sex is for hoes.
Silly ass people, its all part of the human condition. And by the by, it was a very amuzing poem that kept rhythem and rhyme real well. Not to mention expressing a point satirically
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awesome poem. it's been emailed to me before like a year ago. did you write it? or did you copy it here? (not meant to be sarcastic, mean, or anything else) PS: ORAL SEX IS AWESOME!! BOTH WAYS!
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ok...I DIDN'T write that!!! but it's sucha a compliment that SOMEONE out there insists on susing my name...FIND YOUR OWN NAME!!! lol...Maddie*Ü...you'll know it's me, b/c i do my smiley face's right...i shouldn't say that...someone will figure it out sooner or later, or just copy and paste...Maddie*Ü
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I was so mad that I couldn't type....lol...but you know what i mean...Maddie*Ü
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"susing"? *snicker snicker*
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When a dog bites me
i see rainbows in the bruises
and my ass hurts to...Maddie*Ü

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ive seen that b4 r u sure u wrote tht b/c ive gotten tht on an email like last week
*buh~byez*
-AnGeL*