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Poem Number 1563
I'm confused and in pain
I lost my soul in your name
I don't see how we can go on this way
Go ahead, try and dive into my brain
Make sense of this thing called life
YOUR CAUSING ME STRIFE
YOU HAVE STOLEN MY HEART
AND RIPPED IT APART
were all of my efforts in vain
Commentary:
What's the fascination with Caps Lock? It detracts from the words.
DC
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This poem is great and so true about life when you love someone and they hurt you like that its devistating
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When using the caps lock letters the writer is trying to emphasize this meaning to them and sarcasim of this is not needed
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I doubt that. I think they're probably just an idiot.
LemmyFi
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