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Poem Number 1551
RIGHT
that i need to feel your sweaty skin on mine and taste you
Commentary:
Seeming as how
we're both awfully shy
and I can kind of see what's
going to happen here,
would it be
too forward of me
to say that I want
to rip off your clothes right
now and ride you like a pony?
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I like it. What every shy wallflower is dying to say to their big crush.
The Dragon Crystal
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Ditto exactly what Dragon Crystal said. That poem is perfect, and priceless. I absolutely love it.
LemmyFi
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its kinda funny, u know the end about riding like a pony, but it shows what this shy person really felt and wanted to say, but may have trouble because they r shy
LCNH
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