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Teen Salon - One


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Poem Number 1483
Solid Emotions
Pouring from my heart
Not knowing what to do
Or even where to start.
' Cause I'm drowning deeper and deeper , it seems
but you keep pour all you emotions on me engulfing me with your heart with your love
So enight my heart with your pure emtion


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Swimming through solid emotions
Pressing onward
With each stroke I come closer to inner-peace
Searching for that honesty
Honesty from within
Truthfully I’ve never shared too much
Hidden away most feelings
Repress and it’ll all go away
Vague misconceptions of greatness and oneness
Feelings of being unwanted
Forgotten or thrown away
But we all take what we can get
Stroke after stroke
Forgotten emotions exposed
Unwanted and thrown away
“Please don’t ask me just what I think, trust me you don’t wanna know
Please don’t ask me to open up, trust me, trust me, cause I can’t”

~Mark~
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Mark that was some PHAT lines it's amazing how you feel things and write them down like nothin. *miki*
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