POOOOO! like BOOOOO!

SOng bird eyes.
traceing my movements
Across the dance floor.
Waltz with me tonight.
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Soft breath, rose and wine.
Heat on my cheek
as we dance off into the sky
Waltz with me tonight.
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Melody and wet lips
singing my last song.
Fling in love
Waltz with me tonight.
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Raining petals
glitening bubbles
take my hand this time
Waltz with me tonight.
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Fluid and hued
frantic feet out the door.
good bye my love.
Who waltzed with me tonight.Ar? Tell me why ya hate it. And tell me why you like it.

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i hate it because it is a piece of doo-doo, like boo-hoo. i like it because it sings in rythm.-jeni
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Why's it a piece of shit jeni? Ar?
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It's not a peice of shit, it's a peice of doo-doo because the title makes it so. when you title a peice POOOOOOO! it's kinda suggestive. but i do like it, really, i was playing about the doo-doo thing. you asked why it might be hated so i felt it should be answered, i was being stupid, it actually is good and i appreciate it for it's visual beauty.-jeni
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I really don't mind if ya think its a piece of shit. I personnaly think this is one of my worse poems. I just like to know why people like it or hate it. So maybe I can change something to make it easier to read or to try a differant style for a while. Ar?