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Poem Number 1322
Tear well
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Tears well up
As you tear at my heart.
What are you doing?
I thought you were amazing,
The best boyfriend I've ever had.
But now, it's such a cliché
That you're just like all the others.
When will I fish a real catch
Out of the tear well?
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Em :)
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This is a really good poem. I just got dumped by a guy, and this is how I feel right now. This really hit the spot. From Sin
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Cheers 4 the comments Sin, I know its a cliche but you'll feel better soon, I did, keep :)ing. em :)
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