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Teen Salon - One
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Poem Number 1255
Hope you read this ( and I think I know who you are-TMBG)
this is complete so now i must leave
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They say here is you line
You can't cross it
but heres our
its on a moveable pedistal
It can overlap yours
and allow us to break your rules
but if you cross your line
or if you cross ours
then we'll have to send
our parents over
to beat up your parents
.............................I think we all like our space and Also I think we all think our parents can beat each others parents up. Comments are welcome! Aaron rhodes?
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my parents couldn't beat *anybody* up.
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hehe.
khprrr.
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thats our love
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forever your young,
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this suck like shit
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yeah, you are right, my momma could whip anyone's *&$ and she is proud of it.. she still looks like an athelete too.. i think this was interesting.. wondering where you got your inspiration..
christyl
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