Woo Digity

I went to and art show
Watching the feelings in paint
Wanting to have that ability
connect my mind to a brush
Spit my soul on a palet
and spread it in a frame
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I went to an art show
I saw molded people
showing themselves in rock
Turning the wheel of life
and forming themselves
with wise hands in plaster
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I went to an art show
I saw my self there
Wondering why I even show'd;
to watch my own decrpit ability?
The only thing I do is describe
Describe an art show...
I'll never be in one
where has my soul hidden.
.................................................................................... Another self consoius pity poems that I spurt out with a lot. Tell me if ya like it. Aaron Rhodes?
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I am not sure that I understand the title, but I love the poem. I have felt this way before, but never even thought about putiing it into words...great job..the best I have seen by you yet:-)...^kell^...
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i like it. -wannabepoet ..sorry.im kinda still speechless :)
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Once again you have stunned me again. a whip against my back. I am enjoying reading your works----SOULSEARCHER
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This poem has not but one level but multiple levels of conscientiousness
the poet feels an internal bitterness towards him/herself longing to
belong. This is just a far reach to his/her peers. Besides this I find
the poem to be well written and expressed.DREW-
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Drew... I was attempting to express more of a you want what you don't have kinda theme. Thank you for the comment... just wanted to say its not really about wanting to belong but more about admartion of a differant art. Ar?