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Poem Number 584

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Poem Number 585
homeostatic tUniverse Theory: onstars and Black holes
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simply implies both are extreme states of matter forms in the universe/s
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any single point in the 3 dimensional space is caple of becoming one or the other
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and a DEAD STAR WILL NEVER DIE untill a black hole comes
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and black hole will never materialize until a star system comes to balance its universal energy imbalance
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and yetr the cycle is too long for the human life to wait and see
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the dynamics of energy just simply seem to balance it
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but then nobody can hold it or see where it goes or permanently contain
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when a black hole comes to follow the life of a star, energy simply seem to be in its dormant stae
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it just seem to be just building up for the next bout of existence
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and yet energy still lives on then. it is not dissipated but suck in and confined!!!
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apce did never seem to stop these star - black hole interactions
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space just simply make stars and black holes compartmentalized but not seem to make complete energy destruction process to exist
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a dead star that was lost and a black hole that will form could very well be reversed
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a black hole forming new stars instead....
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Poem Number 586
Rambleam
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Can you see my face ma
I' just a little boy
wanna be a rocket man ma
wanna be a rock star
Slippin past the man ma
rock in my jeans pocket ma
soon I may be dead ma
Step past the last chance ma
corner of the store
race to freedom seems so far ma
start teachin where the folds go
glass pipe don't have to kill ya ma
could be a ticket to hell
see ya on the other side ma
perhaps I won't be dead
hope to see ya soon ma
flags white flags blue
flags red
Rambleam
jd
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