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Poem Number 580
wisp
Commentary:
there is no reflection that remains in the mirror
i can not see the truth when possessed with fear
the most passionate embrace was gone in a wisp
afraid to meet the clarity of such seductive lips
the heat would surely have melted the gossamer veil
between where we live - and what we wish were real
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