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Poem Number 578
embrace
and part
sad face
tears start
lost love
regret
time heals
not yet
once more
break
moan and yeild
cry through a sheild
this pain will never end. my heart i feel this sharp pain i reach back to my back and there was a knife in it. the note that i left laying beside me said i wish you where here
so i didnt have to do this stuid thing that i done. the next day you came to my house you found me laying on the floor you look at the note and then you saw the knife that had tear downs on it.
you grib the knife and stuck in your chest. i guest we where ment to be together forever and til the end


Commentary:
eighth line alternates: you bet! forget, don't fret.
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What if
I was to say
Lucky are they
who know both
dark and good
and choose good
because they shall obtain
true power
what if ... ? :)
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i'd say you haven't seen enough of how dark the good can be
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