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Rough Allowed - Two


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Poem Number 577
release
black widow
stick me
blind me
unchain
my code
of chivalry
impale my head
at your gate
while your womb
surrenders
suspenders
bitch ass poop renders
theo huxtable's weekend benders


Commentary:
Blissful sweet release
Mars releases Astronauts
To Venus Far South
Her Driest Desert
recieves them with pains pleasure
the ship bucks wildly
for untold hours
at the end of the release
venus gulps gold rain
now willfully tied
by her martian visitor
and she consumes him

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break
the gnarled shell
hard, boiled and bruised
nutritious, uncannily sweet
unexpected treasures
locked within
a geode of crystalized desire
frozen for centuries
before the heroic dares
to shatter the stone
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break the gnarled shell ......
A great poem! One of the best I've seen on this sight!
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mockery, the sincerest form of flattery
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Get over yourself even, that was not mockery. It's a good poem.
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i received poorly such a fine compliment, i am learning to get over myself, which i hope will keep me from becoming a complete idiot
i apologize for failing to appreciate your sincerity
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