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Poem Number 576
Clocks cascading clearly
While sardine cans danced sincerely
Flailing faultlessly finally
Prying mind for the volley
Then, with a wink, leaving silently
and everywhere rats, rats, everywhere knawing the leg of time
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no crackers
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melting moments
honest bearded women
drawers slide up and down the slope
stretched and stroked across
a landscape of naked trees
is what is offered thee
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