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Poem Number 537
flaming fingers
dancing before the eyes
insect stingers
falling from the skies
sulpher lightning lingers
effervescent spark flies


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What is this, Sheol?
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Who knows? Maybe without the sulpher, no rose smells as sweetly.
Strangely enough, sometimes I wonder if the reward of making a rose smell better causes people to like sulpher even more than roses. It makes you wonder if heaven and hell are the same place even perhaps.
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i think they are.
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