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Poem Number 504
your mundane becomes the new, new ..the paleness of its weary face a hieneious waste
your a con a sharleton a mahookee mahunkey
i defy, i despise you ..words inked into rivers of my blood .. your slicing and dicing has left quite the mess, oh my!
surfing atop with gleeful abadone, i've adapted, i've becom one with rain oh yeah!
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get a life fuckface
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i have a life moron
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pretty sad.
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your pretty sad you mean
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no. YOU are [you're] pretty sad.
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