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Poem Number 3417
Maybe you should man up, pilGRIM
The only wimmens that want super sensitive mins are lesbians
And stop buying yourself toys like some lil boy
And how can one person be so self centered and arrogant AND have such low self esteem too?
What's the going rate of trampled china closets these days?


Commentary:
"The only wimmens that want super sensitive mins are lesbians"

no, lesbians want WIMMINS!

ya know we all start out in the womb as females? even super insensitive mens.

also, people who speak in sports metaphors can shampoo my crotch.


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will you be needing the nits combed out as well?
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The 12th man claims his trampled china closet sold for upward of $200 on Ebay but i wouldn't believe anything he says-- he's an emotional basketcase.
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What the fuck is wrong with all of you...?
I know...I will translate...
I only fall in love with lesbians
I hate this
I nice every girl to death
I am so nice, but inside, I have this...je ne sais quiox
Bursting out, wanting to do mean things to women
But I am not in grade one...anymore
Instead, I have fallen down to an infantile like helplessness
Yes, that is me...
Now, I will translate Amber's reply:
You do not fit within my definition of what is proper
So fuck you. I am a man I am a man
Beep beep
LOL
James
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however you want to define yourself (man, woman, lesbian, vegetable or other), in the future, James, remember to refrain from including me whenever you decide to hold conversations with yourself.

amber
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Poor James just wants some attention. Far from being a man, like a flea-bitten dog instead he wanders around the site with his tail tucked between his legs, snarling and snapping. And after being kicked repeatedly by Amber's thick lesbian boot he's sniffing about in Rough One, looking for a scrap and a scratch, ready to lunge at whatever comes his way.
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O my god, actually, I saw you attacking yet another male poet like some kinda female gestapo agent. It's weird...why do you attack men like that at this stage of their development? You are just making things more difficult for them...everything you say is a lie and totally leads them in the wrong direction. I think you must be a lesbian...one of the man wrecking types. You are not a man and you only think you know best. Why don't you go play with your pharmacuticals..?
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Anyways, sorry guy for arguing on your turf here...I know that the last thing a poet wants is people taking the limelight away from their creations. I suggest Amber that we should both behave like gentlemen...and for future fights, let's take it to a square all our own..hmm?
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"actually, I saw you attacking yet another male poet like some kinda female gestapo agent. It's weird...why do you attack men like that at this stage of their development?"

whom and when? and why are you attacking me? i had nothing to do with you or with this-- you are the one who brought me into it by mentioning me in your post. i merely reminded you to refrain.

your intense defensiveness suggests you are deeply afraid of me.

amber
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oh my.
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