b.r. and s.t. hold down this site
concocting poetry in the middle of the night
fivorously working to achieve their plight
i'd like to see them have a poetry fight
they could go at it head to head
and charge a fee for their minds to be fed
spittin out poetry they've never even read
with lines heavier than 10 tons of led
a smack across the face with ink on the page
and a left hook eyes dotted in a haste of rage
never the ones to let art waste away
but freedom of speech is limited in the states today
so they watch what they say on the illuminating screen
with flashbacks of being a hallucinating teen
i hope all readers understand what i mean
damn i can't help it i'm a poetry fiend
And we do understand you're soon to be reamed
but you weren't crazy, or so it had seemed

this poem is being provided to you by the ecclectic dialectik
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I'm not sure I understand you. Is this a compliment, a put down, or
a request for some harder hitting material? *s.t.*
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it is what it is brother...
(mostly a compliment and the way you guys appear to me in my head, you know up late by a candle just brainstorming poetry with emotion typing away.....that's just the way i see it.
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It's all cool with me. I won't destroy the mental image for you by pasting in the reality. Write on, poetry fiend! :)*s.t.*
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Oh, would some power the giftie gi'e us
to see ourselves as others see us.
(that's a quote) (all be it, not an accurate one.)
Glad to attract a little attention, anyway...BR
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Oh, would some power the giftie gi'e us
to see ourselves as others see us.
(that's a quote) (all be it, not an accurate one.)
Glad to attract a little attention, anyway...BR
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This doubling is getting irritating, irritating, irritating...BR
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This doubling is getting irritating, irritating, irritating...*s.t.*;)
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doubbling and bubbling i find it all troubbling.
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Sorry to digress but...would a poetry war be like a "rock fight" (wasn't that in "Up In Smoke" with cheech & chong?). Just wondering. je
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Lizbeth: loved it dude
You think just like me
well hope to know you more
yahoo ID : mizzyliz03
only incase you want a friend