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Poem Number 212
RAINDROPS IN THE WINE


Commentary:
Raindrops into a glass of wine
or was it an angel crying
as I sit here in the cold rain
I try to myself my life explain

I have travled the whole earth orr
the valleys deep the mountains high and more
I have seen thigs that would make you cry
yes, by my hand seen people die

I have seen my buddies lying in the the mud
I seen rain running down the color of blood
I have seen children with hunger in their eyes
living in squaller covered over in flies

I have done things of which I am ashamed
and many others that can't be claimed
waiter bring me another bottle of wine
my thoughts won't go away and inside i'm dying

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I am sorry I got carried away and finished it
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