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Salon for Rhyming Poetry - Four


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Poem Number 204
Shadowlands
that's what I see
tell me Doc
what's wrong with me
Some folks see flies
Some folks see dots
What do you see?
When shown ink blots?
Shadowlands
I can
I see
the snow caps on the mountains


Commentary:
What the hell is up with the shadow lands crap
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You must be new to I.P.P.
Ok, let me explain. We here are fortunate to have Jocelyn.
She writes one line grabbers, encouraging the rest of us to
flex our imaginations and contribute a line or two. Sometimes she gets carried away with a word or line, in hopes to see many variation of ideas. If you play along with her, it can be fun. So please don't be so harsh and please stop shouting. Play along! The exercise might do you some good after all this site IS interactive.
enjoy! imagine! contribute!
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I second that. Jocelyn is planting seeds. I personally get a kick
out of seeing what develops. (I'd would still encourage her to write some
complete poems though, as well.)*s.t.*

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I certainly agree, also. It's a lot of fun to start with one of Jocelyn's lines and see where you can take it. What I'd like to see, is someone else post the first line and have Jocelyn take it from there and see how she would finish it...BR
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Thanx for backing me up ya guys!
Jocelyn Gonzales
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