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Poem Number 166
step aside , and here my wrath
for you hath crossed my path
wrote not , the words of truth , did you
nor seen the light of beauty , all so true
yet , claim the knowledge you do
and within you the hath grew
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yet , claim the knowledge , you do
and within you the lie hath grew
Commentary:
step aside,and here my wrath
for you,hath crossed my path
wrote not,the words of truth,did you
nor seen the light of beauty,all so true
yet,claim the knowledge,you do
and within you this lie hath grew
believe,you do,that you are the one
that upon you,the light hath shun
even though the light is darkness
disguised as a monarches kiss
standing by to wave farewell
and send with you ,sadness,to dwell
sadness,
to splinter your brain with fragments
-fragments of peices of torment
always picking,always screaming
never yeilding, never dreaming
and this you say is the work of you-
you,could not live,such a life so blue
for meloncholy seen the light
and seen the truth
and to share with all the world
would be a staggered indecensy
to share would rape the the beauty
and dissapoint the want of morrow
for it would merely be a poem
and you would be me,
my left hand strangling the right
my shadow smirking at my grimace
you plagureist split right down my soul
lieing to me, claiming to know
who is me?is it you too?
why,yes,we are two
yet one and two alike
SPLIT PERSONALITY
by the shadow that dances
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Yoda-esque! Thanks for proving I'm not the only one. Nice-it's interesting how it diverges from the beginning style into the "for it would merely be a poem...". I enjoyed both parts and really liked the idea that "you would be me/left hand strangling the right..." Was this all written by one person or is it a collaboration? Jennifer (je)
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only one person , me . i am the shadow that dances .
"lo wash xitish e washasha"
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