Jiffypop-reposted

Jiffy Pop popcorn
in a shiny pie pan
with a little wire handle
and such interesting folded foil
sitting on top.
Placed over a flame,
it's amazing to watch
the foil unfold and billow upwards
growing to such astonishing proportions-
causing onlookers to comment in awe
"How could such a small package
get so very big?!"
That was exactly how I felt
the first time you took me home
and I saw all your hard, naked maleness
in full and turgid glory.
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i think you've popped the life out of this poem
please give it a rest
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Why, anon, I've reposted it here for Jav. However, since you make such an enlightened and intelligent plea and even included a pun I'll grant your request. Thank you ever so for not simply closing it but taking the time to tell me how "rotten" it is. All my love and heart felt gratitude, je
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dear je,
this is not rotten at all. the first time i read it, i liked it.
you have reposted this too many times. i look forward to reading
your offerings. you are so talented. please, more new poems.
anon.
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Ah anon-I've been offering my muse the very same plea. "More new poems!" Thanks for the compliments-point taken on the reposting. Sometimes I get a little crazy. New(er) stuff is posted in Goth...if you're interested. Thanks again-Jennifer (je)