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Poem Number 156
southbound on 23
wondering where the hell I'm going
i cant turn back now
the winds at my sail and it keeps blowing
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its that same thing that keep driving me
so close to that line of insane
that twitch you cant run from and hide from no more
because it is from inside cometh the pain
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Commentary:
#2...I suggest you not use bad language in poems..it ruins the moment!
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Are you a fucking Nun, or what? Since when is Hell considered "bad language"? All of you so-called "rightous ones" were the inventors of the word in the first place. You use the concept of Hell at your immoral pulpits, then condemn those who use the word at all. Religion is a snare and a racket. You sound like a God Damned two-year old. "Stop using nasty-no-no- words or I'm gonna' tell!" Here's a poem for you.
Nasty No-No-Words
They tell me not to use them,
They tell me they are bad.
To use those nasty no-no words
Does not make their dear Lord glad.
To say "God Damn" or "Pussy"
Is hated by thier God;
To call someone a "fuckin' bitch"
Or a "cunt-pump-driving rod".
You have Catholics killing Catholics,
In countries 'cross the sea,
And the old-fart Pope who spurs it on
Is as good as God's decree.
There are Bishops fucking Altar Boys,
Inside the Holy walls.
And money-hungry spawns of God,
Meet men in bathroom stalls.
So don't you say those no-no words,
Or you'll go You-know-where!
You can murder in the name of God,
As long as you don't swear!
Fuck You. (SamIAm)

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LOL Somebody's always picking on poor dear SamIAm. Hilarious :)
Poison Ivy
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SamIAm that was one of the best fucking poems I have evr heard!! It is so true....brilliant!!
~*FieryFairy*~
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Thanx (SamIAm)
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Absoloutley a great comeback!
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You tell them SamIAm, very nice comeback. Besides.. I think fuck is the best word you could use in a poem. Jav
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Very well said, SamIAm....chenopod
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fucking words are fucking words and poetry and prose
Are made from all the fucking words that fucking mankind knows
Dummy.
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That's nice, sweetie. Go back to the kid's table, and slow down on the turkey. (SamIAm)
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