You were the love of my life and the joy in my heart
and i hate to see you go
You gave meaning to my miserable life
more than you'll ever know
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You gave me strength and you gave me love
like none i have ever known
I just want to thank you
for the tenderness you've shown
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So, now i say goodbye my love,
with a sadness in my heart
I hope your life treats you well
now that we're apart
~
~~~~This one's for you SRDM :o(

Lots of feeling. Very well written. M.M.*justme
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Bullshit! Try saying it without sounding like a freakin' Whitney Houston song!
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c'mon, you know you don't really feel that way about being apart. you don't want them to be happy without you.
~dozer
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~dozer, I finally have to confess, I like you! (No, not in that way!) I don't always sign my name the way I should because I'm afraid to get blocked from this sight for being a little cruel. I must confess, however, that I have a burning irritation toward the mundane and common words so prevelent on this sight. It seems every time I make a comment, yours is right below mine in agreement. That is not to say that you have and alway will agree with me, but it's nice to know that someone else out there doesn't see this as a poetry drive-thru. You like to sit and dine. Enjoy! (SamIAm)
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i like having someone else around who says what they really mean instead of being all sticky sweet. but it's not really using your name that will get you kicked off the site. when you visit this, or any other website, the owner of the site can trace your computer, and so ann could block it that way i think. since i enjoy having someone around who says their mind i suggest you visit the site below enter the address for this site and then you can come here anonymously, and you can sign your comments without fear. however, if you write poetry on this site i suggest you use a different name because you will get negative comments no matter how good it is.
this address will let you come here anonymously.
http://www.anonymizer.com/services/surf_for_free.html
have fun with it!
~dozer


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p.s. - (SamIAm) are you able to close your poems? if you use the anonymizer, you will be able to. when i read your name, i was a bit surprised. i will return the favor and i think you will see what i mean. allow me to intruduce myself. i am ~dozer, but i am also poison ivy. are you surprised? i'm trying to decide which name i like better. i hope that's okay with you because like i said in my comment above, i like having someone around who says what they really think and feel, instead of being all fake sweet.

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oh yeah, and close this after you read it. no need sharing the anonymizer with everybody here. or this conversation.
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Hope you've had your jollies today boys. Get a real life. Sweet can be nice and good for everyone, including self absorbed individuals! *justme