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Poem Number 124
I want a man in my life, just not in my house
I want life in my woman, not just a mouse
I want a hero beside me, not just on the screen
I want a girl who adores me and the person I've been
We are two different peopleso obviously mis-matched
so completely incompatible should never be attached
so why do I love you with so much vigour and zeal
and why do I constantly feel the way that I feel
it happens a lot all these things seem to trap me
and all i realy want is to just be happy
Confusion plaguing my mind- paralized by fright
Hoping that my soul will make it through tonight


Commentary:
Added some lines , hope you don't mind
I find as I say and say as I find
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Cool with me. I only wrote the first line, then forgot about it until just now when I happened along and saw it. Haven't been in this salon for awhile.
n'eve
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I added a couple lines too. I think that almost any female can feel the pain of being alone.
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yes. yes they can

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