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Poem Number 115
Caught between two loves,
how can i be so cruel
to decieve the one who cared so much
...and break the golden rule
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One love goes deep
the other love is new
Both loves are real
but only one can be true
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I'm sorry for the deception
...sorry for the pain
I have everything to lose
unsure of what to gain
I'm going to another land
Where no-one knows my name
I'll bathe in sea and walk on sand
To take away my shame.
But I know when all is said and done
No one will be there for me
And I'm going to be the lonely one
As I'm drowning in the sea


Commentary:
oops, i before e, except after c
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what if they both cared about you?
teddie
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Both do, and it's a mess. Oh, and no pun intended on the "deep" part.
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I am also caught between two loves.I dont want to hurt the one Im with now. But I love another.
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I was. I chose. I caused pain. I still regret 44 years later. I don't have any advice. Just regret.
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Whoever finished my poem did a great job. Nee
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wow I too have been torn between loves, I think I always will be... I shed a tear for all of us going thought that same thing

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