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Salon for Rhyming Poetry - Three


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Poem Number 297
Shadowlands
South of the shoulders
North of the navel
East and West of the back
march a boy scout pack
their the beholders
of lovely Mabel
clasping their hands
round shadowlands
shadowlands in my hands
shadowlands in the sands
shadowlands in the stars


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SHADOWLANDS......................................................
SHADOWLANDS......................................................
SHADOWLANDS......................................................
SHADOWLANDS......................................................
SHADOWLANDS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SHADPWLANDS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SHADOWLANDS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SHADOWLANDS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YOU ARE A SAD PERSON, EVERY FUCKEN POEM, SHOWLANDS, DAMN I'M SO ANNOYED WITH YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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That was the intent, so...Thank you Kindly!
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was that poem about tits?

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i believe it were
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