The tale you are hearing is not new
You have heard this story through and through
You have seen your birth,life and death
You may recall a little of the rest
-did you have a good life when you died,
enough to base a movie on?

The snake was Miller light
glazed like Al Franken
we were afraid to touché it
it's shit was hot dead asthma
And she was beside me
old
she's not
Jung.
Now runs in the toilet in the bathroom,LOOK!
She's coming in here!
I can't live though each Century 21 real estate commercial of her moving van!
I let my cheeks slide down
the cool smooth tile
feel the good,cold stinging blood....

WAIT!!!!!

THERE'S BEEN A RE-WRITE HERE!
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Oooh, baby, you give such good commentary! Forget the rhyme, I'll take mine monkeyshine. j
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So you can mix up the words of morrison. Big deal your know better than the vuktures in hip hop feeding off of that which has passed.

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Insightful commentary demonstating some intelligence right up until the
"Big deal..." Was that supposed to be "Big deal, YOU'RE NO better than the VULTURES in hip hop...yadda, yadda"? just curious.