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Poem Number 281
Painted mirrors appeal to me not for who I am but what I see
A kaleidescope of colours dazzling me
Blind to harsh reality
The hatred that I have of me.
Is this simply my destiny.
a place i must learn to be
or will it spin life colors for me
a mirror reflection shine for me
this naked truth my eye must see
What will I be...what fate will be sealed
When this naked truth becomes revealed?
What will I due...will I sue?
If this trth becomes revealed
What will I do.... will I sue?
What will I do ... I feel so blue
What will I do... This feeling must be true
What will I do...learn other ryhming words moo shoe
Commentary:
I loved the last 3 sentences. they just inspired me soooo much the what will i do will i sue if ths truth becumes revealed wat wil i do will i sue. im just lovin it. the begining part is good but not as good.
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