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Salon for Rhyming Poetry - Three


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Poem Number 273
Blues
Playing in my head
I'm so down
might as wll be dead
all around
on my feather bed
torn pictures of you
I'm so blue
.
Greens
cooking in a pot
wath them boil
like me, they're pretty hot
full of steam
on the cook top
she's got you
so I'm green with envy too
.
Reds
like sunrise this morn
it's a warning
of a coming storm
wind and hail
yes I will prevail
I'll fix you
I've got a temper too
.


Commentary:
fourth line wll should be well
line eleven wath should be watch. Sorry
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