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Poem Number 271
what would you say if i held your hand?
would you stay or would you leave?
if i took you to a far-away land
would you smile or would you grieve?
if i place on your finer, a wedding band
would you vow to love and cleave?
or would you just remember me ?
with deception and with greed.
shi sucks
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I love it!- Simple yet meaningful-Keep up the GREAT work! Maggie
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