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Poem Number 270
When the rain comes down,
and the clouds are gray,
someone watches you,
in an unusual way.
They think about the way you smile,
they consider taking you,
but, only for a while.
They inagine your body,
the way you feel,
would someone miss you?
They would give you a thrill.
But what if they find out,
what would they say?
what would they do?
if I took you away?
Commentary:
This is the bomb!
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this is so good but you need to think about some of the lines!
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Um, excuse me, but did we all read the same poem? This is corny and stupid. You can do better. And the term "the bomb" is definitely out of style by now so shut the fuck up. (SamIAm)
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hey who ever wrote this drivel didn't even sign it shouldnt that speak for its self( quil ceda)
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