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Poem Number 264
Tweakers
---je
your mama sucks
---Anonymous
sucks wat? cork
---Anonymous
Shut up punk
---Anonymous
dans a fag
---Anonymous
what up dog
---Anonymous
nuttin chillen
---Anonymous
yo u da man
---Anonymous
but u aint
---Anonymous
bitch
---Anonymous
hell be m,ad
---Anonymous
peace
---Anonymous
peace
---Anonymous
Boom ci coom chi ci dodi di Now Time and Time i talk again about the place where i stopped and left my hen and if you'ds like to visit ben my little hen
---Anonymous
then you can rub your little gem
---Anonymous


Commentary:
Again we sit and pray
to those in charge of fate.
It always ends this way,
endless, eternal wait.
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Over there he's twitching,
she's twiddling her thumbs.
Sometimes someone's bitching
that waiting is so dumb.
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Yet once again in limbo,
staring at the walls,
waiting on some tweaker
or some stupid pager call.
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It's a situation
of our own creating-
this mental mastrubation,
just tweakers-in-waiting.
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Staring at each other,
staring at the floor.
Isn't it a mother
what we're waiting for?
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He who has the dope
is he who calls the shots
so we sit and wait
and listen for the cops.
---j.

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just wanna say i like the poem....it says it all...waiting really is a bitch.
js
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You will win or lose,
Time will tell.
Sometimes, constanly waiting,
Fells like hell.
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You will win or lose,
Time will tell.
Sometimes, constantly waiting,
Fells like hell.
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